English Only 此贴只准说英文--为风mm开

风驰天边

It's the time go to bed!

香蕉你个疤拉

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I don't need to sleep

cadfly

Hi Lin MM

phaetoning

并不是打击你，看你写的英文真的没法修改，虽然俺英文也不咋地
还是先从基础的学起吧，一些特定的句式和固定用法还是首先要掌握的
语法这东西不用死抠，多读多听慢慢的张口就来了
加油吧

QQSF

原帖由 风驰天边 于 2009-7-3 22:37 发表
[s:18] 晕，我的PP早就传上家电来了，只不过，不在这里而已。而且、、、、英语、、、、

well FENGmm~  everyone here replys you very carefully and ask for nothing,  they really are good guys....  
whereas an old saying from war3~  "seeing is believing.....   "    therefore their interest is strictly depend on pic you posted.    although you didnt put any pic till now...    and they will keep watching this topic...    somehow, their enthusiastic heart would [s:57] ....

风MM挖~   这里大家都是好筒子....  回帖认真又不计回报的....   
不过啊魔兽里有句谚语说得好"眼见为实"     所以呢大家的积极性和你上的自个PP是紧密联系的....   尽管到现在你一张PP都没上....   大家也会继续保持关注....    不过这样子下去大家那火热的心啊就会[s:57]

QQSF

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原帖由 风驰天边 于 2009-7-3 22:56 发表
My favorite is the ice cream ，直到今天才发现
I hope have a large refrigerator ,then  I wii   go to the supermarket to buy a kinds of ice cream,on the inside. The more  the better
Whatever the time, want to eat you can eat
It sounds  good！
So, every time I saw   the refrigerator to have a 冲动 ,Wow ice-cream！

today I finally realize, ice cream is My favorite~
hope that I could have a big fridge. In that case, I could buy kinds of ice cream as many as possible from mall, and put all of it inside my fridge. .
whenever you wanna eat, then enjoy~
sounds perfect, isn't it?
therefore I would always reflect to ice cream when I saw a refrigerator.
Wow ice-cream！

老实讲     你写文章的思维非常英文化      如果抛开那些词汇    仅看逻辑承启这都是非常地道的英文表达顺序

所以   要么你是高手在装忽悠.....   要么你本是学英文的天才   因为你的句子中没有任何汉语习惯者会犯的倒装以及思维顺序习惯错误     日常英文本身就是小短句承启逻辑构成的    你的两篇日记老实讲    仅就意思逻辑而言写的是天衣无缝的   因为一般中国人写出来的文字因为语言顺序和思维习惯是需要动大手术来翻译的      这也是所有中国人学英文的最大障碍

综上   要么你别继续装了    该怎怎   不然我们都在被当猴耍     要么你真的应该好好过一下词汇书买本新概念看上个把月    一定会有很好的成绩     某种意义而言   你有学英文的天赋

没有灵魂的鱼

QQ Monkey has a kind heart!

没有灵魂的鱼

Feng MM, Keeping English diary will be helpful, whatever you write and however it look, just insist on writing, it does not matter even if you use"put somebody's hand heavily in somebody's face" instead of "slap",  and with your knowlegde increasing, you would be able to correct the mistakes or improper expression by yourself, and you will see how much progress you make. at that time, you would enjoy the sense of achivement!!

风驰天边

无语，英语四级我就考虑了400分，我是不是天才，高手，自行判断吧！

风驰天边

Thankyou![s:15]

lsy850122

[s:29] [s:29]

挥文入盼

[s:13] [s:13]
我现在考级也肯定过不了
病句特多，不过英语基本是拿来应用，
一般看得明白就行了，如果要考级的
这些句子在这里学习对你来说基本一点用处也没有
倒不如倒在床上温书。

QQSF

原帖由 风驰天边 于 2009-7-4 08:59 发表
无语，英语四级我就考虑了400分，我是不是天才，高手，自行判断吧！

你确信把我写的东西看完了?

风驰天边

[s:11] 感觉好没希望~~~~~~~~~~~

yyy-2

I don't what it seems